The Tangelo

The Tangelo I glazed at the Tangelo in my hand rubbing it delicately. It felt sleek, round and smooth. It sounded like a car skidding roughly across a craggy, jagged rocky road when I lightly peeled the Tangelo. It smelt sour like one million sour lollies transfused together to make one big sour lollie. When I shredded the Tangelo’s skin of I could notice little segments cemented together looking like a orange full moon with white stripes crossed over it. When I split the Tangelo in half a grabbed one segment. I bit a chunk of the segment off and there was still a half left. I stared at the half Tangelo looking at the bubbly flesh as I squeezed the the Tangelo segment firmly in between my fingers. Then we all got to have a small snack in the end of Tangelo.


This is my interesting Tangelo story. I was learning to use interesting descriptive words in this piece of writing. The success criteria was to use the five senses in the story. Looks like, feels like, smells, like, tastes like and sounds like. The thing that I need to work on next is to use more onomatopoeia and adverbs in my next piece of writing. I really enjoyed writing the story and finding the synonyms on synonym finder on google.