Moment in time draft

Last week in Te Ngahere we wrote a piece of writing describing a moment in time. We had to describe a forest using present tense verbs. We were learning to use the correct structure to describe a moment in time. I enjoyed describing the forest and trying to find new words to describe one part. Next time I could write more in my introduction and conclusion.

Plantation disperses across the forest floor. Birds chat away up high in trees.

Beams of sunlight shine through the canopy as people walk through the serene trail.
Long white clouds are spread across the sky as Sparrows and Fantails soar through the air.
Vines are hanging from tall trees swaying side to side in motion with the wind.
A Falcon’s screech echoing across the forest.
The continues smell of damp soggy wood smacking your nose as people wander around the forest.
Little insects scamper along the forest floor as their surroundings are silent around them.

The forest is an untroubled peaceful place.